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Topic: Nowadays many high school students take a gap year after they graduate. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
The practice of taking the gap year is debatable nowadays. In this essay, I will give the reasons why I think that advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Those who argue that taking a year off before going to university is disadvantageous may have convincing arguments. Chief among main reasons is that this can disturb the process of learning as the students may indulge in relaxation and forget the knowledge learn from school. This is particularly important in some countries in the Asia where many children face academic pressures. Another problem that needs to be considered is that students may suffer from dangers when travelling or doing a voluntary work during that time, especially in some remote areas. If these students are not well-equipped with essential surviving skills, they are less likely to know how to deal with life-threatening situations, which may lead to unfortunate accidents.
Apart from aforementioned disadvantages, delaying entering universities for one year can bring more substantial benefits. First advantage for such act is that students can take advantage of this period to travel, which exposes them to different cultures and allows them to meet new people. As the result, they may broaden their knowledge and gain more life experience, which helps prepare them for future jobs. The second point is that students may take part in volunteer campaigns and serve different roles, for example, voluntary teachers or caretakers. Doing this, they can contribute to the society, thereby improving living standards for the other people. Another positive impact is that students can try new things like having different jobs in order to figure out which fits them best, so that they can make better career choice in the future.
In conclusion, despite the adverse effects of taking a gap year, I hold the belief that the advantages involved are far greater.
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