Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 21/01/2017

Đề bài: Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 21/01/2017

To amuse themselves in their leisure time, youngsters are now spending an overwhelming amount of time in shopping centers and malls. In my opinion, this trend negatively influences the youth as well as their community as a whole.

Firstly, from a personal perspective, those young individuals may suffer from symptoms of shopaholic or shopping addictions. They will be less likely to participate in outdoor activities with their loved ones. This may affect their health and reduce the amount of time for their social relationships in the long run. For example, one of my close friends used to spend at least 2 hours on going window shopping in a shopping center near his home. He often refused to play footballs or to hang out with us at weekends, which caused him to gain a lot of weight and to lose some of his mates.

Secondly, form societal point of view, as the juniors are interested in leisure activities like going shopping rather than focusing on study or work, the community may suffer from a decrease in the intellectual level and work productivity. Almost all shopping addicts can spend a whole day going around a mall, which lessens the time spent on the workplace or at school. As a result, there will be less work being done, which causes the economy to suffer. The youths can skip classes and lessons to enjoy going shopping with their friends, making the national Standard drop significantly.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that the phenomenon that a majority of young teenagers are wasting their precious time in shopping malls has many harmful impacts on both the young and the society as a whole.

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