Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Map band điểm 9 hay nhất

1. Đề

The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future.

2. Outline bài

Flow bài là điều đầu tiên bạn cần nắm chắc. Phổ biến nhất là flow như sau:

Intro: Paraphrase lại đề bài nha, không thêm thắt.

Miêu tả tổng quát: Bạn sẽ cần highlight những điểm quan trọng nhất, dễ spot nhất trong bài

• the addition of various buildings to the North and East

• the modification of names of specific areas and their facilities

Thân bài:

Xác định rõ flow map muốn trình bày, trong trường hợp này, DOL gợi ý flow chi tiết như sau:

• Body 1: Mô tả chi tiết North & East 

North: Entrance and Reception are placed by residential areas - accessed through communal gardens

East: The factory is predicted to be replaced by apartments - next to the newly-added parking area

• Body 2: Mô tả chi tiết South & West

Substitution of offices and canteen for parking garages

The 3 bedrooms house and 4 bedroom house will replace the packing and storage areas

Một phần giới thiệu tốt yêu cầu bạn đưa ra chủ đề của nhiệm vụ (trong trường hợp này là chủ đề của bản đồ). Để làm điều này một cách hiệu quả, bạn cần phải diễn giải (reword) thông tin trong câu hỏi. Không sao chép chính xác thông tin trong câu hỏi vì thông tin sao chép sẽ bị giám khảo đánh giá thấp.

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3. 2 Sample Band 9

Sample 1: 

The given table illustrates certain forecasted alternations in an industrial site, which will be transformed into residential areas in the future.  

Overall, the most noticeable changes will be the addition of various buildings to the North and East of the spot; also the modification of names of specific areas and their facilities will be recorded.  

Regarding the East side of this place, the factory is predicted to be replaced by apartments, which will be located next to the newly-added parking area. While the current Entrance and Reception are placed to the North, the plan proposes its substitution by residential areas including 6 bedroom houses which will be accessed through communal gardens.

Significant changes will also be projected on the remaining sides of this site. The 3 bedrooms house and 4 bedroom house will replace the packing and storage areas in the Western part. Additionally, the substitution of offices and canteen for parking garages is also suggested in this plan.The only feature that is predicted to remain its original position is the main road which surrounds the whole area.

Sample 2:

The map illustrates changes made in Pebbleton over the period of 20 years.

Overall, it can be seen that the most noticeable change was the addition of houses and other facilities such as footbridge, tennis court, community center as well as the replacement of old fort with a children’s playground.

Specifically, on the western side of the city, while the lighthouse has not changed its initial position for 20 years, the substitution of the old fort with a children’s playground and the film studio with flats has been recorded. At present, a footbridge has been built to connect the coast road to the old fort road, which greatly assisted students of the school in the south to cross the river. There was a footpath at the end of the footbridge and a tennis court was added in the middle of the footpath and the lighthouse land.

Towards the north of the map, the number of houses increased and the city had a new community center located near the residential area. Regarding the eastern side, almost every feature such as the old fort road, the playing field and the roadbridge remained unchanged.

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